Ahoj, nevím si rady s descriptive essay…něco jsem zkusila vytvoři ale nebude to žádná sláva. Můžete mi někdo zkontrolovat gramatiku? Děkuji

Polar bear live in the Artic Circle, that include Artic Ocean and land masses. They are very good swimmers and hunters. The scientist estimate that two-thirds of the polar beer population can disappear by 2050. Polar bears are stark white and have thick coat of warm fur. They have got black skin under the fur. Average lifetime in the wild is twenty-five to thirty years. Adult male are about 100 kg (and more) heavier than adult female. They are the largest land meat-eater in the world. Bears live alone because they spend most of their life at sea. They hunt their feed from the edge of sea ice. Females period is about eight months length and produce between one and three cubs in den. Cubs are very small when born, their weight is about 0,5 kg and length 30 cm. Cubs stay with their mother until they are 2,5 years old. However climate changes rack that sea ices are getting thinner and they can not hold weight of polar bears. So they died to enervation. Another problem is hunting polar bears for their fur. Most ZOOs in the world produce polar bears. In 2008 United States placed polar bear as a threatened species under the Endangered Species Act.

Polar bear lives in the Artic Circle, spíše má ale asi být Polar Bears, když pak následuje v další větě They… Stejně tak scientists es­timate – Tohle beru spíš jako překlepy.

However climate changes rack that – v této větě mi nesedí rack s návazností that, spíš jste asi měla na mysli: klimatické změny způsobují, že… tady bych v tom případě zvolil jiné slovo.

Polar bears live in the Arctic Circle, that which includes the Arctic Ocean and land masses. They are very good swimmers and hunters. The scientist estimate that two-thirds of the polar beer population can could/may disappear by 2050. Polar bears are stark white and have thick coat of warm fur. They have got black skin under the fur. Average lifetime in the wild is twenty-five to thirty years. Adult males are about 100 kg (and more) heavier than adult female. They are the largest land meat-eater carnivores in the world. Bears live alone because they spend most of their life at sea. They hunt their feed pray from the edge of sea icebergs. Females period Female pregnancy is about eight months length long and they produce give birth to between one and three cubs in den. Cubs are very small when born, their weight is about 0,5 kg and their length 30 cm. Cubs stay with their mother until they are 2,5 years old. However , climate changes rack that sea ices are getting thinner cause sea ice to get thinner and so that they can not hold weight of polar bears. So As a result they died to of enervation (opravdu je mysleno, ze z vycerpani?). Another problem is hunting polar bears for their fur. Most ZOOs in the world produce keep/breed polar bears. In 2008 United States placed the polar bear as a threatened species under the Endangered Species Act.

Neco jsou vice ci mene hrube gramaticke chyby, neco jenom stylistika. Pokud nektere me o/upravy nejsou jasne, tak se ptej. Uplnou spravnosti posledni vety si nejsem zcela jisty (jde rict “place sth under an act”?)