Zdravím všechny, byl by někdo ochotný a koukl by na tento článek a popř. napsal patřičné gramatické chyby? Děkuji moc.

Teenager lifestyle is very exciting and sometimes very dangerous. Somebody peoples drink alcohol, use drugs and their lifestyle is unhealthy. A lot of time I spend in school. School starts at 7:55 and finish at 13:55, but on Thursday finish at 14:45. School is good for me, because I love my field of study. I study hairdresser. My leisure times is after school. I go to the fitness centrum – I’m here one – two o’clock every day, but I cannot train on the weekeng, because I’m not in České Budějovice. After fitness I spend it with friends in some coffee house – where we’ve some desert and cacao or hot chocolate, because a I don’t drink coffee or we go shopping some clothes or visit cinema. When we finish, I go my flat and I do my homework and I study to school – I love every subjects, because I’m clever student and I wanna be celebratet and I want have a good job! When I finish homework, I like surfing by internet, watching youtube and chat with my friends. After that it is time to go to bed. And in the morning my daily routine starts again. Friday after school I go somewhere with my friends to the bar and drink some drinks. At the weekend I usually be with my family. We are riding to the beautician and massages to Linz – It’s Austria. AND what’s about eating? I eat little but often – I eat 7× – 8× every day. It’s special diet on my training. I must eat a lot of eggs, proteins (proteins drink or natural proteins), drink water and some legumes and low fat dairy products. I usually eat salad and fish food – I love sushi with salmon and wassaby sauce. I eat hotdog and little fried food sometimes! I eat healthy, I love my lifestyle!

Teenager lifestyle = Teenager's li­festyle
Somebody peoples drink alcohol – Some of them drink alcohol, use drugs and their lifestyle is unhealthy.
A lot of time I spend in school – I spend a lot of time at school.
School finishes
but on Thursday it finishes

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Děkuji moc

I study to become a hairdresser.. ..in some a coffee house..
I go to my flat .. ..celebrated and I want to have a good job!
I like surfing by the internet
On Friday Friday after school I go somewhere with my friends to the bar
At the weekend, I am usually be with my family.
We are riding go to the beautician.. (opakovaný děj)
AND what’s about eating?

Moc pěkně děkuji i Vám.

To “teenager lifestyle” podle mě není špatně, pokud chcete přivlastnit, pak množnému číslu, tedy teenagers'
I go to the fitness center (pak si nejsem jist, co chcete říct. jestli to, že tam jste jediný, tak I'm the only one there) at two o'clock…
…but I cannot train at the weekend (ON je sice dobře, ale troufnu si říct, že tak 70 – 80% učitelů by Vám to označilo za špatné – je to totiž americká verze)
…where we have a dessert (s jedním S je to poušť)
…we go shopping for some clothes or see a film
… study for school
I love all subjects, because I'm a clever student
chatting with friends
I go to a bar with my friends (to have a drink)
…to a beautician and a masseur in Linz
It's a special diet I have to take due to my training
I have to eat low-fat (se spojovníkem)
I eat hot dogs and little occasionaly fried food

proč množné číslo?

života “tínejdžra” – teenager's life
I eat hot dogs and sometimes a little fried food.

Jasně, určitě je možné oboje, to jsem si neuvědomil .

Na mě to tak působilo ze začátku, tak nevím, co chtěl autor přesně říct