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British history The first inhabitants came to Britain about 5000 BC. They were the small groups of the hunters. Next villagers came to Britain from Europe in the Bronze Age. They were the tribes of Celts. In 55 BC the Romans came to Britain, they built roads and forts throughout the land; the most famous is Hadrian´s Wall, which was stand up against the invasion of Celtic tribes. It lies across England near the Scottish border. Romans brought Christianity to Britain. In the 5th century the Germanic tribes of the Angles, Saxons and Jutes came and pushed the Celts. One of the most important kings was William the Conqueror, Duke of Normandy, who defeated King Harold in the Battle of Hastings. He established a strong central government and appointed Norman nobleman to high positions. He made London the capital town and built the Tower of London. In this time the Norman and Anglo-Saxon language and customs merged. In 1215 King John signed the Magna Charta and in the 13th century the parliamentary system developed. Between 1338 and 1453 there was the Hundred Years’ War against France. The War of Roses was a civil wars between the House of Lancaster (red rose) and the House of York (white rose). The other famous sovereign was Henry VIII. He became king in 17 years. He had six wives. His three children were Mary, Elizabeth and Edward. Marry I was the first Queen Regnant. An Act of Parliament had declared her illegitimate and removed her from the succession to the throne. She married to Spanish King Philip and when she died, her sister Elizabeth became Queen. Elizabeth I was daughter of Henry VIII and Anne Boleyn. She defeated the Spanish Armada and it was founded the first English colony in North America, called it Virginia in honour of the Queen. And also whole period of her reign was named after her. In 1603 the Scottish King James VI became King James I of England and both countries were linked. From 1642 to 1649, there was a Civil War and Oliver Cromwell declared England a republic. Victoria is another Queen who had the whole period of reign named after her. During her long rule she made some African and Asian regions part of her Empire. 20 years after her death, in 1921, Ireland declared independence.

History of the U. S. A Vikings discovered America probably around the year 1000 A. D., but didn’t establish any settlement. Later (1492) explorer Columbus discovered the American continent. The colonization began when the Pilgrims settled in New England (1620). They were followed by thousands of colonists from Europe. They were persecuted because of their religion. So they had to escape. At first 13. colonist were formed were under the British control. Later the colonist didn’t want to be dependent on Britain. The British parliament passed some acts in which the place taxes on goods exported to America: glass, paper, and tea. The result of these acts was a growing protests which ended with a very famous event called Boston tea party (1773). A group of Americans dressed them selves as Indians and they threw bags a tea into Boston Harbor. In protest of unfair taxes. This event let to the American Revolutionary War. (1775). A year later the colonial representatives declared independence (1776) from the king of England. A very important document was signed – DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENTS. The chief general George Washington became the first president of U.S.A. In 1787 the constitution war signed between the Northern and Southern parts a sharp difference arose (started). The American Civil War broke out in 1861, it ended in 1864. The president Abraham Lincoln, who brought it to the victory, let the northern army. After the war the slavery was abolished in 1863. The prosperity of the country rapidly increased. The U.S.A. didn’t enter the World War II. Until the Japanese attacked on the Pearl Harbor. After the war an enormous development began. In the 60-tis the civil right movement and later against the war in Vietnam was very strong. Two personalities were assassinated (J. F. Kennedy, Martin Luther King). The last president of the U.S.A. is William Clinton reelected in ’96.

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