Presentation about my holiday

Za domácí úkol máme vymyslet projekt na téma moje prázdniny.. nějak jsem zplodila tohle a potřebovala bych pomoct s opravou. Děkuji předem. 

Welcome to my presentation about my holiday one year ago. My holiday was very interesting and funny too. The best moments of the holiday I spent in Turkey. I went to Turkey with my parents and my little brother. My mother booked, a 11-day holiday in a lovely hotel which is located directly at the beach. Travel agent told my mother that it was a wonderful place for families with children. The hotel's name's Club Turtas. From Prague we flew by plane directly to Turkey. The flight lasted four hours. When we arrived to the hotel, the receptionist gave us the keys to our room. Then we went to look on the beach. The weather was great and water in the sea was very hot. We went to the beach every day and sunbathed and swam. The food was delicious too. We could choose according to your taste. Most of the day we spent on the beach. I lay and read my favorite book, my mother sunbathed, dad sat at the bar and my brother played a water pool with his new friends. We had a very good time. Every evening we went to the city centre to go shopping. We bought lots of souvenirs and cheap clothes. Shops were a paradise for me and my mom. My dad and my brother looked for a sports outfit. At night we slept, but the last night we went to the disco. It was great. We enjoyed. Six hours before departure, my mom found out that we have a little space in the suitcase, so dad had to go into town to buy an extra suitcase. When we arrived back into the Czech Republic, the weather was awful. It was only 20 degrees. My mother said: Please, I want to back! These are my favorite holidays.

(Do you have any question?,,,)

My holiday was very interesting and also funny .
also = také ( zajímavá dovolená, a také zábavná)
Jestli se mýlim, tak kdyžtak opravu 

s tím “too” je to také dobře

1. My mother booked, a 11-day holiday in a lovely hotel which is located directly at the beach.

bez čárky

2.Travel agent told my mother that it was a wonderful place for families with children.

potřeba nějaký člen a/the travel agent

3.The flight lasted four hours.

lépe took

4. When we arrived to the hotel

arrive in/at

5.We could choose according to your taste.

lépe místo according to použít depending on

6.Six hours before departure, my mom found out that we have a little space in the suitcase

we had little space – souslednost časová, že máme málo místo místa little space – málo místa ne a little space to by bylo pozitivní, že máte ještě trochu volného místa

7.When we arrived back into the Czech Republic

opět arrive in sw.

8.I want to back

I want to get back…je potřeba tam dát nějaké sloveso..go, get

9. (Do you have any question?,,,)

spíše questions

Raději jsem to očísloval, třeba na to bude mít někdo jiný názor, abychom se v tom vyznali.

We could choose according to your taste – acoording to our taste.

It was great. We enjoyed it.

“…my brother played a water pool…” – Co je to water pool? Asi jste chtěla napsat “water polo” (bez členu) nebo “played in a pool”.

Všem Vám mnohokrát děkuji.

alebo

My holiday was at once interesting and funny.

at once – zaroven

Six hours before departure, my mom found out that we have a little space in the suitcase…

Mozno skor

Six hours before the departure, my mom found out that we had not enough space in the suitcase…

had not se už moc nepoužívá, raději vůbec nepoužívejte 

Když už:
We didn't have enough space.

nebo jak jsem psal:

We had little space in the suitcase.

Ja som to zle napisal, lebo som zrovna este nieco ine robil =D ale myslel som didnt have =D