Ahoj, byl by někdo tak ochotný a podíval se hlavně na gramatickou stránku mého motivačního dopisu na Erasmus? Výhrady k obsahu jako takového sem klidně taky hrňte Dík moc!

Dear Sir or Madam

I would like to apply for an Erasmus + exchange programe for winter semester 2016/2017. I am highly convinced that stay abroad would have significantly positive effect on my future studies at my home university and on my career as well.

I am currently studying for my bachelor's degree at Charles University in Prague. Concerning my field of study I am especially interested in international marketing and communication of international companies. According to this concern I have experienced work in multinational environment. I consider the exchange study programe Erasmus + as an ideal way how to educate myself and expand my horizonts in this particular branche of communication studies and this is my main motivation for studying abroad. I have chosen Erasmus University Rotterdam, Departement of Media and Communication in particular, as I have ascertained that this institution completely meets my interests. I believe that it is ideal university where to gain a lot of knowledge about internaional business environment thanks to the courses focusing on comunication and marketing in corporate companies. Concerning my language skills, apart from the school lessons communication in English while working in companies with management from other country or on the purpose to communicate with collegues from another member state.

Excepting my academic and careere goals I choose Erasmus Univer because I am attracted to dutch culture and the Neatherladn itself since I was on the exchange student programme in Neatherland in highschool. I very appreciate the connection of possibility to acknowledge dutch culture and living in the highly multicultural environment.

Other information about my quelification are stated in my CV. I believe that my backround and experience closely correspond to defined requirements. I hope this cover letter describes great importance for me to join Erasmus+ exchange programe.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your answer. Sincerely,

I consider the exchange study programe Erasmus + as an ideal way how to educate myself …
viz tento článek: http://www.helpforenglish.cz/…ch-vetach-ne

Besides, (apart from, in addition to) my academic and careere goals… zde ve smyslu kromě – navíc k

Tenhle odstavec moc nechápu, něco tu chybí, např: viz tučné písmo

Concerning my language skills, apart from the school lessons communication in English, I use English language while working in companies with management from other country or for the purpose of communicating with collegues from another member state.

Pak je tam pár překlepů např: Neatherladn

Strašně moc děkuju Opravím

other countries – another country
the Netherlands