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Dobrý den, máme za úkol připravit si 3 témata (sci-fi, horror, krimi příběh) na sloh a já bych potřeboval pomoc. Byl by tu někdo tak hodný a zkontroloval mi 1 z mých návrhů? Děkuji.
Hi, my name is Oliver and I wrote an essay about the scariest moment in my life. Everything happened ten days ago in the forest. This forest was situated in the middle of a nowhere.
I was sitting in a tent, when I heard that noice first time. I stood up and looked around. The sky was really dark and moon wasn't shining well so I didn't see anyone. My friends were sleeping so I woke them up. “Hey! Wake up, something is outside.” After a while they finally woke up and I said them everything.
They thought, that I was joking or mad. One guy from our group stood up and went outside to check it. Everything looked ok but then we heard that weird noice again. We looked ou of a tent and saw a dead body. It was our friend who was checking the outside area. We were very scaried, so we called a police.
After one hour the police finally arrived. We said them everything that happened. We thought we are not in danger, but then it happened again. The scary noice appeared again and someone shouted : “Look! Something really big is standing right there!” Everybody turned and looked in the dark forest. Police officers turn the flashlights on and they aimed it in the dark. There was standing the ghost with machete. The police officers started to shoot him but he was still standing there. They shouted on him and he disappeared. Everyone was scaried.
The very next day I and rest of our group returned home.
