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Everybody say you should make your dreams come true and do what you want. Now it is the right time to do it. My name is …, I am 16 years old and I am a student of first class of information services and librarianship on high school .......

I would like to be a part of project Erasmus+ and two-week internship in London. I chose London as an issue of my final essay in primary school. I was in London one year ago with primary school, but I have never worked abroad. That is why I am sure this internship will be great experience and practice for my current studium and future career. Once I want to live in Great Britain and work here as a journalist. I have been learning English for 9 years, however I need to improve my skills in this language and this is a good opportunity. As well I am interested in lifestyle, culture, monuments and people in this town.

Thank you for concidering my application. I hope I will have the opportunity to improve my abilities in this project.

1. Buď Everybody says nebo They say
2. I am a freshman student / I'm in a first year of high school specialized in…
3. Spíš by mělo být “Erasmus+ project”, ale to je detail
4. and a two-week internship
5. I was in London a year ago when I was in primary school
6. will be a great experience
7. I want to live in Great Britain one day and work there
8. I have been learning English for 9 years. however, I need to…
9. I am interested in lifestyle, culture, monuments and people in this town as well

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