Prosím o zkontrolování přebásněné české písně do angličtiny. (Dělám si to jen pro sebe, ale nechci si zpívat něco, co je gramaticky špatně.)
We are living in the nature
very far from the hometown.
We are talking about Rachel,
the dearest girl we've known.
Everyone is a strong man,
we are fighting very well.
Because we have joined the army,
we are singing the whole day
how pretty, so nice, is our native land.
Our powerful weapon
makes enemies threaten.
We are so great.