Ahoj, chtěl bych se zeptat, jestli bych sem nemohl napsat ten text co jsme měli napsat v soutěži (soutěž s Johnem Grishamem), já jako soutěžit nechci, jen by mě zajímala správnost a gramatika – pokud možno nějak opravit. A taky Váš názor(na jaké úrovni ten text vypadá).

Píšu to proto, že jsem téměř nikdy nic nepsal v angličitně. Jako gramatika, reading a speaking to jo, ale ne writing. A zajímalo by mě, jak na tom jsem.-)

Jen se bojím ho napsat sem (abych nenapovídal nebo tak něco), takže pokud můžu Marku, tak napiš, pokud ne tak tento topic můžes smazat:) Díky moc

Já bohužel nemám čas Vám text opravit. Když ho sem ale napíšete, třeba vám někdo chybky opraví. Udělejte to ale prosím až po skončení soutěže.

Harry Potter and The order of the Phoenix
Hello there, I was asked to write little text about a book I read, and a film I watched.
I chose the book called Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix written by J.K.Rowling. I bet you know it. Everybody does.
When I was reading the part, when Sirius died, I remembered I was almost crying. This book has all, what the book needs to, however, the film doesn't. I think the book is much better then the film. I like the other films, but not this one.
Unfortunately the book was obviously too big for one-and-half-hour film, so a lot of scenes were cut down.
The end of the book, which was on 200 sides, was given in the film at ten minutes time-sequence. And in the book it was the most interesting part, but at the film, it ran too quickly. Directors gave to this film too much effects, I think. It makes the film worse, in some parts it looks like a horror. When you are reading the book, you practically live with the book, every chapter you're reading. But in the this film, it was different. It just ran too fast. I think this film wasn't as good as films before. Now I am waiting for the new one. It is going to the cinema in start of the July.

škoda no asi mi to nikdo neohodnotí