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Dear Mary,
I want you to know that I have moved out from England. Nowadays I live in a large house in France. The house is more spacious than our apartment in London and especially contains a garden, where we will have a pool and perhaps a small trampoline. However, the best advantage of my rehousing is permission thanks to I am allowed to have a dog. On the other hand we cannot have fireplace due to small living room and I do not have any friends here, therefore I would like to invite you visit the place where I have been living. Since I know you love travelling and sightseeing, I am sure you will gladly accept my offer.
I am looking forward to hearing you.
Yours Sincerely
Martin
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všiml jsem si že mi tam chybí pár členu – permission, living room,
fireplace
I do not have any friends here – zde mělo být původně yet ale nevěděl jsem kam ho napsat tak to nechal tak
I have been living – může to být takto nebo mi tam chyby for X months?
travelling s dvěma L
a nejhorší na tom je, že jsem to psal formalním stylem což asi je
špatně
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Dear John,
I'd like to ask you if I could go with to you our trip in mountains, because as
you know I don't own a car. I'm willing to pay you all costs of transport.
I don't like traveling by public transport at all.
Please let me know if you agree with this offer. In case you agree please send me additional information. Where and when I ought to wait for you.
Best wishes,
Martin
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