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As a conclusion of this work, I would like to note that this work was a great contribution for me. I created a detailed statistics about the eye defects in our school and even I managed to confirm the strong influence of external factors on the occurrence of these defects. I think that we should all reflect on common actions which continuously damaging our eyes.

In this work I wanted to point to this global problem in the entire population.

But I wasn’t satisfied with information what I found in the media, but I wanted to own the true facts. These facts I was very concern. Every third student is suffering from a defect of vision.

The solution is not the treatment of these defects, the solution is prevention. Many people go to the doctor only when they find that they have a problem, but it would be better to go for regular checks and keep our eyes in shape.

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As a conclusion of this work, I would like to note that this thesis has made a great contribution to my knowledge. I created detailed statistics regarding the eye defects in our school and even managed to confirm the strong influence of external factors on the occurrence of these defects. I think that we should all reflect on the common actions which continuously cause damage to our eyes.

In this work I wanted to widely publicise our knowledge of this global problem.

I was not satisfied with the information I found in the media, I wanted to ascertain the true facts, it is with these that I had most concern. One out of every three students are suffering from a vision defect.

The solution is not the treatment of these defects, the solution is prevention. Many people go to the doctor only when they find that they have a problem, but it would be better to go for regular checks and keep our eyes in shape.

Rather than doctor, perhaps say Optician or Optometrist?