nature nevím jestli v tom prvním odstavci je vhodná, spíš countryside ?, nevím jestli se používá true friend, já bych spíš užila genuine, pozor je language ne lenguage, proud of beeing a Czech, měl by tam být člen myslím. Nerozumím co chceš říct „it lives in morale of every Czech person“ a taky nakonci „I dont stand in need of doing it“, impressed of mi tam trošku nesedí ale asi to můžeš užít.
Celkově dobrý 

díky moc

• používa sa REMOVE vo význame odsťahovať sa? Mne sa tam viac hodí len MOVE
  • „we have remained our morhern lenguage up to this day“ – asi to má byť MODERN LANGUAGE, zase sa mi ale nezdá REMAIN, použil by som KEEP
  • „it lives in morale of every Czech person“ – akože ta história prežíva v morálke každého Čecha?
  • IMPRESSED OF je zle, budď BY alebo WITH
  • Im quite A sensitive person
  • „I hate their reserve“ – použil by som buď RESERVED ATTITUDE alebo RETICENCE a ešte čo má znamenať impassibleness?
  • learn A new language
  • GOD sa používa bez členu
  • prosím vás používajte kvalitnejší slovník ako ten na seznamu 

Mam pohovor na jedné škole a mel by být v angličtine tak sem si něco připravil tak jestly by ste my ho nezkontrolovali prosím
So tell me something about you.........
I am 15 years old, my name is Tomáš , my hobbies are travelling, sport and studying. In future I would like to go to your high grammar school and after I want to go to the University and be a lawyer or teacher, I like languages, history and geography. My favourite films are documentary films, and detective series and my favourite music are pop and alternative music, but I prefer pop music because it gives me energy when i am tired.

And tell me something about your family…
I have a brother and sister and my parents are divorced.My brother is 9 years old and my sister 20 years old.Brother is going to elementary school and sister to university. My mum is a housewife, and my father is a tennis coach.

And can you tell me something about your primary school?
My primary school is zš ------------, it is a state school.This school is in Prague 4. I like it there because there are good people. My favourite subjects are English and Czech language, geography, history and math.
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Nemelo by byt spis „a lawyer or a teacher“, „a brother and a sister“ ?
A dale „because there are good people there“ ?

• high grammar school znamená gymnázium? Ak myslíš strednú a keďže používaš BrE spelling, malo by to byť SECONDARY SCHOOL alebo GRAMMAR SCHOOL
  • GO TO UNIVERSITY/COLLEGE
  • my favourite FILM GENRES are documentary atd.
  • my favourite MUSIC IS ..
  • Brother GOES TO/ATTENDS elementary school
  • v pohovore radšej použiť MOTHER ako MUM
  • It is a state school in Prague 4 – načo dávať tak veľa jednoduchých viet za sebou
  • jazyk len samotne ENGLISH či CZECH, matika MATHS (BrE)/MATH (AmE)

dík Bongo…;-)