AHoj, potřebovala bych pomoc s motivačním dopisem, který píšu poprvé v životě. mám tam určitě spoustu chyb,ale jelikož jsem to četla mnohokrát už je nejspíš nevidím. Navíc bych ocenila i váš názor na esej jako takovou. Děkuju 

With this letter I would like to candidate for the XXX programme to study at one of the american universities. When I was 19 years old I had to choose my university which will help me to build abilities for my future employnment. My choice led me to the XXX University in XXX and I can frankly say it is well-known and constantly developing university offerring many occasins for its students. I have always been the person who wants to be better, get new skills and do more than neccessary. I would like to experience some opportunities which brings me my alma mater. Before studying at university I knew I want to stay in the USA for some time because I have been interested in differences between American and European lifestyle and culture. So now I am using the oportunity and applying for it. Living in the different environment can me help understand another people and change my look on the world. Everyone has own habits and reality and I do not want to be conservative thinking but be open-mineded and tolerable to distinctive attitude toward life. That is pretty important ability for job I will do. One of the main purposes is to gain knowledge about the world around me and beyond and try to live quite opposite how I lived to this time.

As a student of Pedagogy- social work is appropriate having social skills and can communicate effectively with others. Being alone in foreign country is challenge for me and useful for learning how to solve the problems and share thoughts. By my point of view practising in the real life where you can rely only on you is the good way for trainig effective communication and being more hardy what is very important in contemporary society. Moreover I really want to improve my English skills. Not only I like this language but most of employees request English in many possitions at the labor market. So today it is neccessary facility in order to get good and well-paid job.

Another reason I would like to study at the university in the U. S. is that I am curious about different approach and system of education. There are a wide range of interesting courses. The most impressive one is XXX in XX which I can not study at my college in XXX. In my field of study is important capability of neogating and speaking with people. So studying in foreign state is the chance to learn new strategies and methods using in this area what can help me being more succesful. Our society is developing constantly, so bringing new strategies and approaches is required. In my opinion it is a great source of inspiration for inovation and improvement.

As a student of the second class it is supposed to select a theme of bachelor’s thesis. Because of facing with domestic violence many times in my surrounding I decided focuse on it. This issue is wide spread in a company having a huge imapct on families and mainly on children. The United States of Americe are one of the first federation where the law and preventive measures were taken. So I supposed their system is more sophisticated and effective due to lot of experiences. I am minded to compare both systems so staying in the U.S. would allow me do research and make my thesis in higher quality. In addition I feel interest about social status of social worker in both countries.

Anyway my interest is not only about education and social work but I am fancy to know the country. Till my thirteen I have been keen on visiting a New World. I have often been dreaming about travelling across the country and experiencing all the beautiful nature and modern cities with unique atmosphere. States of America are very ethnically diverse country with unique social subcultures. Meet american people is a perfect way of understanding their mentality and manner of life. I hope I will have occasion of tasting not merely cuisine but their social habits and folklore.

Thank you for taking the time to consider my letter of motivation.

Cesky preklad nebo original by nebyl? Me osobne se to pak lepe opravuje, kdyz vim, co tim autor myslel.

no bohužel ne, psala jsem to rovnou anglicky.

Myslis, ze to nekdo docte az do konce? Uz se nekdo, krome tebe, dostal pres prvni odstavec? To pozaduje ta universita takovy rozsah?

souhlasim, vic jak jeden odstavec bych nedaval. Ten dopis ma upoutat, zaujmout a ne uspat (nic ve zlem). Proste a jednoduse – Jsem vhodnym kandidatem, protoze umim to, to a to.

Jeslti je jako druhe kolo nejaky pohovor, potom bych tento text vyuzil tam.

délku eseje jsem se nevymyslela já, ale univerzita…požaduje 2–3 strany (A4) takže budu foufat,že to do konce dočtou…jinak v prvním kole se odevzdávají motivační eseje, doporučení a přihláška a potom je pohovor