Můžete mi prosím tohle zkontrolovat? Dear Mrs. Shaw I would like to invite you at reunion of British Elementary school. We have been in 8.A when you have been our class teacher in 2003. It has been 10 years so I and Kate Brown decided to organized this reunion. All students of our class accepted an invitation. It is going to be at very place where we had school summer trip. We planed it on the 7th of May in CoolVillage. It is going to start at 8 AM in Peters's Restaurant and official end is at 10 PM. We all hope you can make it. Best regards.

Děkuji.

Pár návrhů.

Dear Mrs. Shaw
I would like to invite you at the reunion of British Elementary school. We were in 8.A when you were our class teacher in 2003. It has been 10 years now so I and Kate Brown have decided to organized this reunion. All students of our class accepted the invitation. It is going to be at the very same place where we used to go on school summer trips. The reunion is planned to be on the 7th of May in CoolVillage. It is going to start at 8 AM in Peters's Restaurant and official end is at 10 PM. We all hope you can make it.
Best regards.

Děkuji.

Měl bych ještě pár návrhů ..

I would like to invite you to the … Kate Brown and I have decided to organize (I je vždy až za jménem druhé osoby a and, i královna říká My husband and I …) go for school summer trips (možná by se lépe hodilo excursion – to by bylo s on … where we used to go on summer excursions. It will start at.

Myslím, že se mluví o jednom roce, takže místo “used to go for school summer trips” stačí “went for a school summer trip”, případně “for our school summer trip”. A ještě: the official end

No určitě může jen jsem dedukoval, jak to tazatel myslel.