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Cover letter Erasmus

 

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Dear Sir or Madam, With this cover letter I would like express my interest in possibility goes to study with Erasmus programme.
My name is Tomas Vebr, currently I am studying second year at the Faculty of electrical Engineering and Informatics at the University Of Pardubice (UPCE). As my study programme I have chosen Information Technology.
I have decided to apply for this programme, because I am sure it will be golden opportunity gain new knowledge’s in my study programme, personal experiences and help me for my future studies.
Belgium was the obvious choice for me. It is a country with amazing history, geography and culture. I would like acquaint with local traditions and people, because people in Belgium are one of friendliest in Europe. But mainly I would familiarize how high level of education in country like Belgium is. And that is why I chose for student city Gent.
Specifically for Hogeschool Gent. Firstly, Hogeschool Gent is Belgium's largest institution for higher education after the universities of Louvain and Ghent and that is why I expect very high level of education. Another reason why I chose this school is that I can study same or similar courses as at the UPCE. I would particularly like to focus on courses that relate to database. But I also have opportunity study courses that are not teaching at my university and I take it as a great opportunity to learn things that I would not come into contact at the UPCE. Another reason is that there are not split course into lecture and seminars, but there is one educational block for three and four hour. This block contains both lecture and seminar so you can immediately try out things which you learned in theory. And finally I will be able to talk with people from all over the world and so improve my language skills.
I would be very grateful if I get the chance to represent our university abroad. I believe that I would represent our university in a good light.

Yours faithfully,

1. …I would like to express my interest in the possibliity of going to study with Erasmus programme.
2. Ve druhé větě bych klidně vypustil slovo “currently”, napsal bych to takto: “My name is Tomas Vebr, I've been studying at the university of xxx for two years
3. … it will be a golden oportunity to gain new knowledge, personal experiences and to help me…
4. I would like to acquaint with…, because people in Belgium are one of the most friendliest in Europe.
5. But mainly I would like to familiarize how high level of education is in a country like Belgium.
6. …I can study the same or similar courses
7. But I also have an opportunity to study courses which/that are not taught
8. …that courses are not split into lectures and seminars (”there are" je klidně možno úplně vynechat)
9. …for three and four hours

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