Nechala jsem se inspirovat a při hledání vzorů pro motivační dopis pro Erasmus jsem narazila na jeden rtady z fŕa. Ráda bych si ho také nechala překontrolovat, vím, že tam těch chyb bude více..Takže pokud by se tu někdo našel, byla bych mooooc vděčná 

Dear Mr or Mrs.

My name is .............., I am studing Food technology (master’s pro­gramme) at Tomas Bata University in Zlín. I was very pleased to be chosen as a potential member of Erasmus program in Chalmers University in Sweden.

At first, I would like to tell, that studing in your country is big chance for me and it is very important for me. Sweden is very nice advanced country, with rich history and amazing nature. I would like to see it and know more about your culture and community. I think, Erasmus programme is the best way, how to know more about your lifestyle.

Another reason, why I want to study at Chalmers is a possibility to be in a very multicultural community, where I can expand more language abilities and get to know different culture of other members of Erasmus.

And the main reason is acquire new knowledge in my study programme Food Technology. I chose this program, because food quality and good sensory evaluation of food is very important today, but not commonplace. It is very important technology of Food control, monitor and improve. I am trying to get a lot of knowledge of this program and get to know new information from practice life. I work as a laboratory technician in Tipafrost company, where I analyze the microbiological and chemical quality of ice cream.

I believe, studing at Yours University help me broaden my horizons and learn new knowledge. This is a main reason for my choice of subjects, which are especially for studing programme Food Technology.

It would be an honour for me if I got a chance to study at Chalmers Universities. I believe that it could help me in overcoming future challenges.

Thank you very much for Your answer.

Your sincerely

Bc. .............­.............­..

1. Dear Sir or Madam
2. I am studying Food technology
3. …of Erasmus program – “program” je přijatelné jen v AmE, v BrE by bylo “programme” (a vzhledem k tomu, že dále máte “programme”, tak bych ho použil i zde).
4. At first, I would like to tell that (bez čárky) studying in your country is a big chance for me…
5. Sweden is very nice, advanced country…
6. I think that Erasmus programme is a best way to know…
7. Another reason why I…
8. …community where I can…
9. …and get to know different cultures…
10. And the main reason is to acquire…
11. …of Food controlling, monitoring and improving.
12. …to get a lot of knowledge of this programme…
13. …new information about daily life.
14. …in Tipafrost company where (bez čárky)…
15. I believe that studying at your university will help me…
16. This is the main reason for my choice of subjects which (bez čárky) are focused on Food technology programme.
17. …for studying programme
18. …to study at Chalmers University.
19. …to help me in upcoming future challenges
20. Thank you very much for your answer. (v AJ nepoužíváme v dopisech a e-mailech velké písmeno k oslovení jako v ČJ. Místo toho používáme např. tituly).
21. Yours sincerely.

FIRST vs. FIRSTLY vs. AT FIRST

Hrozně, hrozně, hrozně mooooc děkuju!!! Moc mi to pomohlo!

Díky

4.First I would like to say that (bez čárky) studying in your country is a big chance for me…
5. Sweden is a very nice country…

• get to know new information from practice life..stačí get to know je blíže poznat..stačí get
• It is very important technology of Food control, monitor and improve. – tuto větu nechápu
• learn new knowledge – tato kolokace se mi zdá přinejmenším zvláštní

Místo sincerely bych dal faithfully, protože začínáte oslovením Dear Sir or Madam. Sice se jedná o konvenci, kterou i rodilci často nedodržují, ale třeba by Vám to nějaký ten bodík navíc přineslo.

“Learn new knowledge” je opravdu zvláštní… Všude jinde jste to vyjádřila dobře, tady ale zřejmě došlo ke zkratu či chybě v Matrixu. Můžete samozřejmě použit GET nebo GAIN.