Ahoj:) Chtěla bych vás moc poprosit a to jestli by jste po mě nezkontrolovali příběh ,který jsem napsala v angličtině. Jelikož v angličtině nemám moc dobré známky ,tak mi na tom hodně záleží:) Mají tam být všechny tři časy ,ale nemám tam přítomný a předminulý. Jak by jste to změnili? Děkuju Yesterday a famous singer said that he will go to the ice skating rink. He had fear because he skated very long ago. He Still wondering about that one. Finally, he said „I gone there!“ He took his skates and went. When he walked into the stadium he saw two small boys with mom on skates. He put on his skates and started riding. He skated and so began making stupidity. He rode and skip around until he fell to the ground. He woke up in the hospital with upheaval brain. Today she came to him mom of two boys of the stadion and she gave him chocolate. He thanked and over time have been good friends.

<strike> He had fear because he skated very long ago. </strike>
He was scared because he hadn't skated for a long time.

Psala jste to rovnou do angličtiny, nebo jste si to nejdříve napsala česky? 

He is still wondering…

Finally, he said „I will go there!“

Today, the mom of the two boys came to visit him… – pozor na slovosled.

Yesterday a famous singer said that he would go to the ice skating rink. Pokud je daná událost již minulostí, měl by by být posun času.

Yesterday a famous singer said (that) he will would go to the ice skating rink.
He was Still wondering thinking about that one it all the time.