prosím byl by někdo ochotný si přečíst můj cover letter? byla jsem vybrána na kurz AJ na Maltu – mám tam poslat motivák v AJ. díky za všechny připomínky

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in summer language course General English at Malta University Language School.

My name is Eliška Kristková, I've been studying at the University of Veterinary and Pharmaceutical Sciences Brno for three years. As my study programme I have chosen Pharmacy, because I am very interested in chemistry and its applications to medicine.

I have decided to apply for the language course at Malta, because I am sure it will be a very efficient and successfully method to improve my English, personal experiences and help me for my future studies.

I am learning English for nine years. However my language skills are still quite passive.

I believe that studying abroad can change it, because I will get a chance to communicate with students in similar circumstances.

I would like to attend the course in July 2015.

Thank You so much for Your consideration. I would be very grateful if you consider my application.

I look forward to Your answer.

Sincerely,

Osobně tam nevidím moc problémů, kromě těchto 3:

• I am learning English for nine years x I have been learning English
• However my language skills are still quite passive. x However, my language skills are still quite passive. (dal bych čátku)
• I would be very grateful if you consider my application. I would be very grateful if you considered my application.

MOC děkuju.

Ještě bych změnil
personal experiences

• namísto course at Malta má být course in Malta
• namísto successfully má být successful

  A ještě nevím co ta velká písmena You, Your…to se používá?

Opraveno! Děkuju. velká písmena You, Your se nepíší

Ještě jsem přehlédl chybějící člen před course:

“…my interest in the summer language course…”