Zdravím všechny, je tu prosím někdo,kdo by mohl kouknout na mojí úvahu? Byla bych moc šťastná,jelikož moje angličtina není zrovna nejlepší a byla bych ráda kdyby někdo kouknul na gramatiku a celkovou srozumitelnost! Děkuji moc!

Parents know best what is good for teenagers

Most parents know what is the best for their children because when parents advice their children,the advice always comes with good purpose and of course from their heart.They want only the best for them and they want to see their children the best of all other children.But at a certain age , the world is viewed differently from the perspective of teenagers than from the perspective of parents.The question we need to answer is: although parents want for us only the best are they always right ?

It is hard to deny that parents have always truth, although they get protective teenegers and not only them also children and ask obey their rules.But they give and do everything for children hapiness and their success.

On the other hand this is definitely the best for children because because it can be argued that they have not freedoms to do anything they want to.And teenagers think that they are the smartest in the world but is it really so?

To sum up,there are there are so many angles.Parents know what is the best for us because of the love that the carry to us.In my view,parents know what is good for us and they have of course a lots of experiences but still I am of the opinion that their views may not always be the best.

It is hard to deny that parents are always right.
have the truth jsem ještě neviděl.

Děkuji moc!

1. Most parents know what is best (bez členu) for their children because when they give advice to them, it always comes… (jde mi o nahrazování zájmeny, aby se slova zbytečně neopakovala).
2. They only want the best for them and they also think that their children must be the best ones in the world.
3. The question we need to answer is: Parents only want the best for us. But are they always right?
4. …that parents are always right – a vůbec celý ten odstavec je nějak zvláštně formulován. Vlastně ani moc nevím, co chcete říct.
5. …for children's hap­piness and success (přivl.zájmeno být nemusí)
6. On the other hand, this is… – opět nechápu, co tím odstavcem chcete říct. Ale předpokládám, že by mělo být “no freedom”.
7. …there are so many different points of view. Parents know what is best (bez členu) for us, because of love and interest that they give us.
8. In my opinion… a lot of / lots of experiences, but they are not alwys right, of course.

Bylo by dobré nějak přeformulovat odstavce zmíněné v bodech 4 a 6.