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Hello everyone, I want to tell you my story. It is about my horror journey. It happened six years ago, when I was 10 years old. I was with my mum on holiday on Crete in Greek. We were relaxing and discovering the historic places of the island. We went on some trips- to the palace Knossos and to the cave of Zeus’ childhood, we were in the Cretan aquarium etc. The last trip was on the island Spinalonga. Spinalonga is an isle with a well-known fortress Spinalonga. The fortress occupies the whole surface of island. When you see the island from the sea, you can have a really nice view on the cyan sea, the blue sky and the long stone walls surrounding a small island with a few stone houses. The island was originally Cretan, then Venetian and then Turkish. When the island finally got Greek again, Turks didn’t want to move away. So the Cretan government made a leprosarium out of the island. Today it is just a tourist attraction. But back to my story. I and mum went on the trip with a local travel-agency. It was a really hot day, the sun was blazing, and there was no cloud on the sky. There were some jellyfishes and small sparkling fishes in the sea. When our boat wharfed, the guide said we had an hour and half for strolling around the island. Everyone walked away and so did I and mum. We joined some foreign group and listened to some facts about history of an island. It was really interesting and we kind of forgot the time is running out. A few minutes later we were running too. When we arrived in the wharf we saw a stern of our boat far away! We were really frightened, because we were in this scary former leprosarium all alone! Since there was almost no shadow on the island, it was even worse. We were thinking what to do, when mum got a great idea. She can speak Russian, so she asked a guide of the group we had met before for help. The guide was willing, so a few minutes later we were voyaging in the direction where the Crete was. On the island we found out our group is still on the sea- they were having lunch. We followed their example and bought a pizza and some drink. We were sitting in a lovely restaurant when we saw our kind of greenish group getting out of the boat. We came in front of our guide and asked why she hadn’t waited for us. She said she couldn’t. I hope it was her last guiding year. The rest of the trip was normal. We said our delegate what happened. I can’t exactly remember what happened next, but I know I don’t want to visit another leprosarium again.

Děkuji

1. I was on holiday in Crete, Greece with my mum
2. We relaxed and discovered…
3. the Knossos palace, Spinalonga island
4. …fortress called Spinalonga
5. the whole surface of the island
6. When the Greek finally took over the island, the Turks…
7. My mum and I went…
8. …there was no cloud in the sky
9. There were some jellyfish and small sparkling fish (fishes neexistuje, fish má stejný tvar i v mn.č.)
10. an hour and a half
11. and so did we (přijde mi zbytečné tam znovu dávat “já s mámou”, takhle se do toho aspoň nezamotáte)
12. We joined a foreign group … about the history of the island.
13. …and we kind of forgot about the time / forgot that we were running out of time
14. A few minutes later, we were in a hurry
15. Since there was almost no shade on the island… (“shadow” je stín, který vrháte, “shade” je stín, pod který se můžete eventuálně schovat)
16. The guide was helpful (po “willing” byste měl říct přímo, k čemu byl ochotný)
17. We were going towards Crete… (“voyaging” bych sem nedával, je to takové zbytečně fancy)
18. On the island, we…
19. …and bought a pizza and a drink
20. …when we saw our group getting off the boat. They seemed to be seasick (popravdě nevím, jestli říkají něco s tím zeleným, ale asi bych to vyřešil, jak píšu)
21. We came (up) to our guide
22. The rest was okay / all right
23. We told our delegate

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