Ahoj, píšu cover letter na Erasmus, mohl bych vás poprosit o revizi? Moc děkuju.

Dear Sir or Madam,

with this cover letter I would like to express my interest in Erasmus+ programme to have a chance to study abroad for one semester.

I am currently a student of the Faculty of Informatics and Statistics at the University of Economics in Prague. As my study programme I have chosen Information Systems and Technologies and as my minor specialization Marketing.

There are several reasons why I have decided to apply for the Erasmus+ programme. I truly believe studying abroad would be very useful for improving my language and communication skills and I also believe this is a uniqe opportunity to meet new culture. I am convinced that studying and living abroad would be very helpful for my future studies and professional career.

Finland is the perfect choice for me. It would be very interesting to experience the Finnish school system which is marked as one of the best in the world, as well as the high life standard.

Specifically I would love to attend the University of Tampere. I find very interesting that there is an opportunity to choose from various courses in marketing and information technologies at actually three universities in Tampere. Considering my current study programme, I believe that this university would be greatly helpful with deepening my knowledge. Also, Tampere is a beautiful city with many possible activities.

As my second option I have chose the University of Oulu, which is also a university with a strong name. It provides an opportunity to study very interesting courses in marketing and IT as well.

I would be honored if you consider my application and give me a chance to spend a semester at one of these universities.

Yours faithfully,

Hi drdt. These are the changes I would suggest, they're mostly stylistic/cultural. Good luck with your application!

Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am currently a student of the Faculty of Informatics and Statistics at the University of Economics in Prague. As my study programme I have chosen Information Systems and Technologies and as my minor specialization Marketing.

There are several reasons why I have decided to apply for the Erasmus+ programme. I truly believe studying abroad would be very useful for improving my language and communication skills and I also believe this is a unique opportunity to (meet ) discover / learn about / experience / engage with a new culture. I am convinced that studying and living abroad would be very helpful for my future studies and professional career. Finland is the perfect choice for me. It would be very interesting to experience the Finnish (school ) education system which is marked assessed as one of the best in the world, as well as the high life standard of living.. Specifically I would love to attend the University of Tampere. I find it very interesting that there is an opportunity to choose from various courses in marketing and information technologies at actually no less than three universities in Tampere. Considering my current study programme, I believe that this university would be greatly helpful with deepening my knowledge. Also, Tampere is a beautiful city with many possible activities. As my second option I have chose the University of Oulu, which is also a university with a strong name. – It– That provides an opportunity to study very interesting courses in marketing and IT as well. I would be honored if you consider my application and (give ) offer me a chance to spend a semester at one of these universities.

Thank you very much!