Ahojky, můžete mi někdo, prosím zkontrolovat čárky a spojovací výrazy v souvětích? Trošku v tom plavu. Moc děkuji.

1)Dalí wanted to study art so he went to the Royal Academy of Art in Madrid, whence he was expelled twice and he never took his final examinations.

2)When he went to Paris, in 1928, he met the Spanish painters Pablo Picasso and Joan Miró and he established himself as the principle figure of a group of surrealists artists, whose leader was André Breton.

3)In 1929 he found the style, consisted of the world of the unconscious, recalled during our dreams, which would make him famous.

4)In 1927, Dalí met Russian immigrant, Gala, who was ten years older than he was.

5)At the time, she was married to a French poet, but because she wanted to stay with Dalí, she decided to leave him.

6)In 1940 he went to the United States where he stayed for 8 years and when, in 1948, he and Gala returned to Europe, they spent most of their time in Spain or Paris.

7)Dalí became deeply depressed when Gala died, in 1982, so that he moved to castle he had bought for her, to Púbol.

8)In 1989 he died of heart failure in this castle where he lived for the rest of his life.

Je to sice o osm let později, ale může to někomu pomoci takže to uvedu. ;) 1)Dalí wanted to study art, so he went to the Royal Academy of Art in Madrid, whence he was expelled twice, and he never took his final examinations.

2)When he went to Paris, in 1928, he met the Spanish painters Pablo Picasso and Joan Miró, and he established himself as the principle figure of a group of surrealists artists, whose leader was André Breton.

3)In 1929, he found the style consisted of the world of the unconscious recalled during our dreams, which would make him famous.

4)In 1927, Dalí met Russian immigrant Gala, who was ten years older than he was.

5)At the time, she was married to a French poet, but, because she wanted to stay with Dalí, she decided to leave him.

6)In 1940, he went to the United States, where he stayed for 8 years and when, in 1948, he and Gala returned to Europe, they spent most of their time in Spain or Paris.

7)Dalí became deeply depressed when Gala died, in 1982, so he moved to the castle he had bought for her, to Púbol.

8)In 1989, he died of heart failure in this castle, where he lived for the rest of his life.

Osobně vycházím z Penguin Guide to Punctuation, která je o čárkách a interpunkci jako takové v bristké angličtině.