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I going to Medical high school.I chose Medical high school, beacuse I want a doctor, beacuse is very interesting and importatnt work.I started at Medical high school on 1st September 2011.

The first positive is that school have buffet.It is very good, beacuse we have bought food and drink, sweets atd … Shop assistant is very kind and friendly. The second positive is good teachers.Teachers every time help me, when I haven´t understand education.The third positive is our collective.Our collective is very good.Everybody help other school mate.In our collective is seldom fight, but this fight is settle at once.We have four boys in class.They are very funny and friendly.

The first negative is that school haven´t own canteen.We have must going to strange canteen.
The second negative is that school is enormous maze.In school ate lots of stairs and class.I have lose the way yet.The third negative is we have little outing and excursion.

Overall is school good, but the has some negative.I ´m glad that going to Medical high school.

Vlastně je to celý špatně

Filipe, ty víš, jak člověka „povzbudit“. =D

Ja to skusim:

I visit medical high school. I chose this school because I always wanted to be a doctor. It's very interesting and important work. I started my medical high school study on 12st January.

The primary advantage of this school is school's cafeteria. I like it cause we can buy some food, drinks, sweets and others anytime we want. Shop assistant seems to be very kind and friendly. Next advantage is positive attitude of teachers towards individuals. They help me with understanding of education gladly whenever I need it. Third good thing is fellowship of our community. Everybody is willing to help others classmates. In our community are skirmishes and ruptures very rare and fade out very quick. We have four boys in our class. All of them are very hot and funny.

nebo:

I attend a medical high school in XY… I have been studying these medical high school since 1st January 2011.

je to střední nebo vysoká? Vysoká je university, střední high school

Nějak v tom textu nesedí datum September 2011.

no to je pravda

school's cafeteria ?