Ahoj, najde se tu někdo kdo by si přečetl můj cover letter a upozornil mně na gramatické chyby a případně jiné nedostatky, prosím.
Dear Mr. or Mrs.
My name is XY and I was very pleased to be chosen as a potential member of Erasmus program. In this cover letter I would like to tell, how important this is for me. I am studying second year at the Faculty of Mechanical Engineering at the Brno University of Technology, at the study programme of Fluid Engineering.
I have decided to apply for this programme, because I am sure it will be a good opportunity to gain new knowledge’s in power, process and environmental engineering, which are closely related with fluid engineering. Also I would like to improve my knowledge’s at hydraulic machinery especially with pumps and I will be able to enhance my lab experience and numerical modelling at you facilities, since your University has a great reputation it that field. I could gain experience with another education system and it will help me with my future career prospective.
Another reason is that I will be able to improve my language skills. The best way how to do this is practising it with other speakers without any chance of using my native language. But here, in the Czech Republic, it is very difficult, impossible to speak that way. And finally it would be a chance to get to know new country and enable me to build strong social network with people through our continent.
Thank You very much for Your answer. Yours faithfully XY